We’re back with the second post in our weekly community project, where we post a render or animation created by a member of the Cgtuts+ community, and ask you to provide feedback and constructive criticism on their work. It’s a great way to learn more about the intricacies of computer graphics, express your viewpoint, and have your own content critiqued by your fellow artists!
Quick Ground Rules
- Be nice! We’ve deliberately chosen work that isn’t perfect, so please be constructive with any criticism.
- Feel free to offer any type of advice - Adil would particularly like critiques on the motion and camera angles used in his animation.
- You can also link to another video or render that you feel offers a great example of this type of content done exceptionally well.
So let’s get to it, here’s our second animation for critique, created by Adil Mubarak!
Enzo vs C320
A Little Background
A short video done over the holiday’s. I was in a rush so I was not able to fix the background city. I also downloaded the car models off the internet and the buildings are of Google 3d warehouse. I would like you to critique on the motion in particular and the camera angles. I have been learning 3ds max for a total of 6 months.
Please let us know what you think in the comments – how would you have approached this project or done things differently? Any thoughts on how it could be improved or taken to the next level. Chime in below!
You can check out more of Adil’s work on his Youtube channel: Adil Mubarak Productions
The most constructive and helpful comments will be featured on the site. Interested in submitting your own video or 3D render? You can do so here! and have your work featured in a future Cgtuts+ Workshop!